I think the first peer review went rather well, I got some very good feed back, though I apparently discouraged my partner because I already had around five pages, while she only had about two. Despite that I believe I was able to give her a few pointers. It was nice to get another persons opinion on my paper rather than the usual people I corner and make edit them. I was able to tell whether I was making my point at that my sentence structure made sense, because usually after a while I can’t tell anymore. So progress is being made.